WALHT write an interesting recount. I am trying to add more detail. I found it hard because it's so hard to type. Next time I want to add full stops.
Wednesday, 18 September 2019
Going to the pools
I went to the pools and when I got into the pools the pools was so freezing that I couldn't move. but I was so luckily that mum told me to get out of the pools so I got out and went to the warm water. when I got into the warm pools I felt so warm that I want to put my head down the warm water so I put my head down.
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